Wednesday, 27 March 2013

The Bull Run

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This is my bull that I had to draw for my reading activity, I think it looks awesome. It says muscles on the top, fierce eyes near its eyes, foam near its mouth, strength in neck, thuddering hooves and whip-like tail. The story was by Paul Mason.Please comment and enjoy.

Tuesday, 26 March 2013


Beans Moment (Energy)
WALT choose words that describe a moment for the reader

  • begin in the action
  • present tense (I am, not I was)
  • short, sharp sentences
  • uses the senses (smell, taste, look, hear, touch)
  • strong verbs

When I get to the car park I'm excited. I race out of the car and smelt fresh air rushing against me. It felt nice because the car was really hot in there. I ran  to the redwoods because it’s more adventures to walk on. My mum has to stop about two times each time we go up the peak. We are about half way and I think I can see the people hang gliding just at the tip of the peak. It must be really scary to do it and if it breaks I'm certain that you will die by breaking your legs and breaking your back. Then we get up to the dirty trail and I walk along it and we finally get to the top and my auntie was up there and my mum chatted to her for about 15 minutes so me and my dad went up the path to the very edge but not on the peak. 

There was a fence so you wouldn't stumble off the edge. Then we all walked even higher and I zoomed ahead there was a cool but tough breeze and mum says ‘this is high enough so lets go down’. So it’s a long trip down to the car park and on the way we found some goats! We did not expect some ivory coloured goats just trotting along the lime grass. We try to pat the ivory coloured goats but a huge rush of wind pushes the goats further away from us so we couldn't pat them. Then we finally got to the car and We were exhausted. Then on the way my dad said ‘you can have some biscuits from the boot if you want.’ So I leaned against the seat.  I touched the end of the bag and pulled it and I got some and the rest of the way home was joyous.       

Wednesday, 20 March 2013

If I was principal

If I was the principal

If I was the principal I would add a Mcdonalds cafe and the restaurant and you have to bring your own money to school to pay for it. It’s like mosses and juices. If children wanted yummy food they could get it.

My second decision would be that we would have a diving board also a waterslide because children sometimes just hate doing the same dive in the school pool.

My third decision would be that there would be a soft serve ice cream machine. there would be limit of ice cream inside it every day. You can put on hundreds and thousands lollies and flakes.

Friday, 15 March 2013

5 things you should know about me

This is 5 things you should know about me and I did this on my Google drive and enjoy.  

Friday, 8 March 2013

Beau and I

This is Beau and I. He likes bmx, BBQ grillers, snakes (not the real snakes the lolly snake). Also he likes rugby and cricket. We both like pizza, minecraft, rugby and basketball. I like sleeping, chocolate fish, soccer and more. So have a look at all the things we like.

Wednesday, 6 March 2013

My learning slogan

This is my learning slogan and video games are kind of educational. I hope you like my slogan.
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